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Published in the UK by Polygon (March 19th, '09) and in the US by Houghton Mifflin Harcourt (Nov '09).
BROKEN DREAMS
by Nick Quantrill
NICK QUANTRILL was born and raised in Hull, an isolated industrial port in East Yorkshire. Never realising he could be a writer, Nick spent most of his twenties shouting and bawling his way around Sunday League football pitches before studying for a degree in Social Policy. Approaching now or never time, Nick started writing crime stories set in and around his home city. The result is ‘Broken Dreams,’ a novel which focuses on Hull’s past and future through the lens of the city’s lost fishing industry. ‘Broken Dreams’ will be published by Caffeine Nights, late 2009.
Chapter 1
‘You didn’t hear or see anything?’
I shook my head. It’s not every day you’re accused of murdering a client. I checked myself in the mirror; the cuts on my face leaving a bloody mess and a bottom lip twice its normal size. It didn’t look clever. The phone call had woken me and after listening to the message, I washed down some painkillers, threw on an old tracksuit and stepped out into the night. The taxi arrived quickly and drove me through the deserted streets of Hull towards my office in the Old Town. Ten minutes later I was sat in my chair, waiting for Don to say something. He was my business partner, but more importantly, my mentor. I explained that I’d been jumped as I’d walked home.
‘Are you sure?’
‘Nothing.’ All I knew was my mobile had been taken. It sounded feeble, given the state of my face.
Don towers above me, so I always feel like a naughty child when he tells me off. I’m in my early forties and still in reasonable shape, but I knew when to keep my mouth shut.
I heard the toilet flush and looked at Don, who was refusing to meet my eye. I turned and watched Detective Sergeant Richard Coleman walk into the room.
‘Joe Geraghty, Private Investigator’ he said, still drying his hands on a paper towel.
I nodded a greeting. ‘Make yourself at home, why don’t you?’
He sat on the top of the table opposite me. ‘I’ll get to the point; Don said you were outside of Jennifer Murdoch’s house tonight?’
‘I didn’t make it.’
‘No?’
‘No.’
‘What did you do tonight?’
‘Went to the pub.’ I stared at him, assuming he might know why I’d felt the need to get drunk tonight.
‘With anyone in particular?’
I shook my head. He was oblivious. ‘Why do you ask?’
‘She’s dead’ Coleman said, staring straight at me, ‘She put up quite a fight, but I can’t go into the details.’ He paused to look at me before changing the subject. ‘Don tells me you were watching her on behalf of her employer.’
‘A false illness claim’ I said, before he had chance to go on. ‘She claims she was suffering from stress and was unable to work. Her employer disagrees. Perfectly normal.’
‘Don tells me she’s the company’s accountant, right?’
I nodded.
‘Any luck with it?’
‘Not yet.’ We’d only been on the case for a couple of days and didn’t have the necessary proof.
‘Notice any one else watching her?’
I shook my head. I asked if Terrence Briggs, her employer, had received the news.
Coleman confirmed he’d be speaking to him. Another fee gone, I thought but didn’t dare say.
‘Do you want to tell me what happened?’ asked Coleman, pointing to my face.
‘I was attacked on my way home. Lost my mobile and what money I had on me.’
‘Who by?’
‘No idea.’
‘Report it?’
‘No.’
Coleman sighed. ‘Did you see the man?’
‘No.’
‘Local?’
I thought about it. ‘Sounded it.’
‘Where did it happen?’
‘A ten-foot near my flat.’
‘No witnesses?’
‘I don’t think so.’
Coleman sat back in his seat and looked from Don to myself. ‘Upset anybody lately?’
Don stared at me, looking for confirmation. I shook my head. ‘No.’
‘Your story is you were attacked by an assailant, identity unknown, and you weren’t anywhere near Jennifer Murdoch’s house tonight?’
‘Correct.’ I sipped the coffee Don had made and tried to read Coleman’s face.
‘I’ll need a statement from you tomorrow.’ He pointed at my cuts and bruises. ‘You might want to think about reporting the assault, too.’
Coleman stood up and told Don he’d be in touch. He looked at me again before leaving.
‘What the fuck are you playing at?’ Don asked me, once he’d shut the door on the policeman. He didn’t swear very often.
‘I was attacked.’ It sounded weak.
‘And you’re telling the truth about not being near Murdoch’s house?’
It was my turn to be indignant. ‘Of course I am.’
‘We’re not pissing about here, Joe.’
I nodded. It doesn’t come any more serious than murder, so I knew the police would be throwing some resources at it. I sat up, my head feeling clearer for the caffeine. ‘Did you tell them?’ He would often tell the police when and where we are performing surveillance as a professional courtesy. If the police knew we had a genuine and legitimate reason for following an individual, it was supposed to prevent future misunderstandings. As I was learning, the system wasn’t perfect.
Don shook his head. ‘I hadn’t got round to telling them.’
I considered the situation. They’d obviously seen my car outside of Murdoch’s house the previous day. ‘They were watching her?’
‘Or her husband’ Don suggested. He took my empty mug off me and shook his head. ‘You’d best report the assault.’
I said I would, but it would be pointless. The truth was I didn’t know who had attacked me. Losing my mobile was a pain but I could get a new one easy enough. What was occupying my mind was the fact the police knew I had been carrying out surveillance outside Murdoch’s house. I looked like I’d been involved in a fight and had no alibi to speak of. It was a chance I couldn’t take; people have been arrested for much less. I knew I was going to have to find out why Jennifer Murdoch had been murdered.
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Copyright © Nick Quantrill, 2009