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JASON
STARR
(photo, right, by Jerry Bauer) is the author of Cold Caller, Nothing Personal, Fake I.D.,
Hard Feelings and Tough Luck. His work has been compared to James M.
Cain, Jim Thompson, Patricia Highsmith and Charles Willeford. Definitely noir,
then, we can all agree. But Jason Starr has stamped his own identity on the genre with his
astonishing series of impeccably constructed stories of fickle fate. So much so,
that noir
writers of the future will have to stand comparison with him. And that's
just not fair!
Allan Guthrie tried his best not to be Starr-struck when he interviewed Jason for Noir Originals.
Allan Guthrie: Your first published novel, COLD CALLER - good enough to have been bought, un-agented, by NO EXIT in the UK - is extremely confidently written. Was COLD CALLER your first attempt at a novel or do you have another hidden in a drawer somewhere? And what do you believe were the reasons behind the maturity of the writing? (I won't accept "raw talent" as an answer!)
Jason Starr: Thanks for calling
the writing in COLD CALLER mature but, trust me, the book didn't get snapped
right up. I have a very large pile of rejections from agents and publishers,
some of them blowing me off pretty harshly. I remember a couple of agents hung
up on me when I called to inquire about the status of the manuscript. One call
went like this:
ME: Hi, I'm calling about the book I sent you three months ago. It's called COLD
CALLER...
POMPOUS AGENT: It didn't work for me.
ME: Oh, because--
POMPOUS AGENT: It didn't work for me!
(click)
I also have a bunch of very cold letters, basically telling me to quit writing.
It can get very bleak at times when you send out ten manuscripts a week, then a
couple of weeks later get 10 rejections. It gets even more frustrating when
publishers tell you they don't accept unsolicited manuscripts, and agents tell
you they aren't taking on new clients. It seems like there is no way to get
published. Ironically, I think it was my own "cold calling" experience
that kept me going. Telemarketers aren't used to taking no for an answer, so if
I got ten rejections in the mail, I just sent out another 20 letters the next
day. I had to keep reminding myself that 95 percent of all submissions probably
aren't even read, or if they are read they're read by assistants who don't know
anything about crime fiction (if this is true or not, didn't matter--it kept me
psyched up to keep going). Eventually, I got a couple of encouraging letters,
from people who did seem to "get" the writing, and I knew that I'd get
through to somebody eventually. The whole process probably took about a year. I
had done a lot of playwriting previously, and I wrote a couple of novella length
manuscripts that were not very good at all, and I also wrote one detective novel
that really sucked. So, no, COLD CALLER, was definitely not my first attempt at
writing. It took me a while to find my voice and, most importantly, write the
kind of books I enjoy reading myself.
AG: It’s no secret you’re an admirer of the great Charles Willeford. You must have been delighted when the Literary Review called you his "worthy successor." Which are your favourite Willeford novels, and what is it about him you admire?
JS: I'm flattered by the "worthy successor" comment, but I hope people understand that those sort of comments are really just marketing tools for publishers. Somebody might go into a bookstore and pick up one of my books who has never heard of me before, but has heard of Willeford, so they'll buy the book, hopefully because they're getting a rough idea for the type of book it is. But if the person expects to read a Willeford novel, they'll be disappointed. Can I just vent for one second? It really pisses me off when some smart-ass reviewer spends the whole review comparing me to Willeford, or another author mentioned in a blurb, saying that my book is nothing like those author's books. What the hell does that have to do with the book I wrote? I DIDN'T WRITE THAT BLURB, SOMEBODY ELSE DID!!!...Okay, I'm better now...I get Jim Thompson, Patricia Highsmith, and James M. Cain comparisons too, but I really think my books are only similar to these writers in a very general way. The only real similarity is that I write dark crime novels, usually with amoral protagonists, so reviewers and publishers people immediately think of other writers who have created these types of characters. I understand why it's done, but it can be a double-edged sword.
But, to answer your question. It's true, I've been a huge admirer of Willeford's work for a long time. I know I'm not in the consensus, but I think THE SHARK-INFESTED CUSTARD is his best book. It might have been ahead of its time when it was published, and I'm not sure the publisher knew what to do with it, but I think it's a fantastic crime novel. I love PICK-UP, COCKFIGHTER, the Hoke Moseley novels, and I also love THE HIGH PRIEST OF CALIFORNIA. I think what I like most about Willeford is his irreverence. He didn't care if his books were marketable or not, if they had amoral characters, or unsatisfying endings--he wrote what he wanted to write and he didn't give a damn what anyone thought. I mean some of his characters are such total assholes--I think it's great! He probably paid a price for this because, until the Moseley novels, he wasn't a real commercial success. But even with the Moseley novels, he wrote them his own way, with each book having a different style. And the dry sense of humor in his books is priceless. He really was a guy who marched to his own drumbeat.
AG: How about yourself? How do you set your own parameters? Are you
affected by reader expectations? Would you, for instance, consider writing
a caper novel?
JS:
AG: You make a distinction between crime fiction and detective fiction.
Can you explain the difference for those who might not see the distinction? And,
loosely related, how do you feel about being described as a "mystery"
writer?
JS:
Some of my books (especially HARD FEELINGS and TOUGH LUCK) have some mysterious elements in them. There are mini mysteries within the plot that eventually get solved, but all my books are crime novels. I always keep the cops and detectives outside the story. Hitchcock once said, when asked about why he always has the police as minor characters in his films, that "Cops are boring." I have to admit that I feel the same way. There are some excellent police procedurals and detective novels and novels about police officers (Ellroy's THE BLACK DAHLIA pops into my head), but when I'm reading I usually find the criminals much more interesting than the police, so when I write I naturally try to stick to the criminals' perspectives. That said, I have to admit, I love rogue cop novels, such as Lionel White's, BEFORE I DIE, so that would definitely be an exception...But, no, I don't mind being called "a mystery writer" one bit. My books sometimes get reviewed in the mystery column of newspapers, and are sold in the mystery section of bookstores. I guess some people consider crime fiction to be a sub genre of mystery fiction so there isn't a real place for crime fiction, but as long as the books get attention I'm happy. I just hope that people don't pick up my books expecting to solve a locked room mystery.
AG: You mention Lionel White, one of the most prolific crime writers of
the 50s/60s. If you'd had the chance to meet him when he was alive, what
question(s) would you have liked to ask him?
JS:
AG: Two of the techniques you mention (first person novels and
multi-narrated thrillers) are very much part of your own repertoire. You also
write in single viewpoint third person. It's unusual to demonstrate such
versatility over the course of only five novels. How did you decide which
approach would work best for each book? And have you discovered you have a
preference?
JS:
AG: At what point during the writing of a novel do you start thinking about the next one? After you've finished a novel, do you go straight into the next one?
JS: I'm always a few books ahead of myself. When I'm writing one, I'm outlining a few more. In fact, sometimes I start writing the other books and continue writing them for a few days, then go back to the one I'm really working on. At the very least, I always have ideas for other books while I'm writing, and at least jot the ideas down...When I finish writing a novel I usually have a few chapters written of the next one. Then there is all the time waiting for my agent and editor to read the book, and doing revisions on the book, so when I finally turn in the new book I'm more than halfway through the next one. By the time the book is published I usually have at least a draft of the next one finished, and I've started the one to follow that one. I enjoy writing every day so I don't really take any breaks from it. Maybe I'll take a weekend off, but I always like to get into a new project.
AG: Do you start with a synopsis?
JS: I usually have a rough outline of a book before I start writing, but I'm very flexible with it. I cut and paste all the time, moving things around, and the book eventually takes shape.
AG: What do you expect from yourself in a normal writing day?
JS: I write, on average, three or four hours a day. I try to write two to three pages a day, but I don't really keep a set goal for myself. If I spend a day editing and plotting out parts of a book, but only write a paragraph or two, I don't stress about it because I know that the day I write will be easier because of all the "set-up work" I did the day before.
AG: How many drafts do you normally write?
JS: In the computer age it's really hard to estimate how many actual drafts I do. I might do ten or fifteen official drafts, but I make so many changes within the drafts, as I'm writing, that I might actually do twenty or twenty-five drafts. Then it goes on to copyediting and I do a couple more. It's always my goal to get my books as tight as possible, cutting anything I think is extraneous, even within sentences. Sometimes I'll even use shorter words, if I can get the same meaning across.
AG: How much input do your agent and editor have? Do you solicit opinions from anybody else? And how do you decide whether such advice is good or bad?
JS: My agent and editor have a lot of input in my books and make great suggestions. But before I get to that point my first reader has always been my wife. She really knows the rhythm of my writing and helps me get my books into shape before I show them to anyone else. I think it's important to have a reader, or readers, you trust to show your work to. When I was starting out writing, it was harder to tell the good advice from the bad, which is one of my problems with writing workshops. You have to sit there, listening to people comment about your work, and most of them don't know what they're talking about. I think getting bad advice can throw a lot of young writers off because it's hard to make any sense out of all the noise. But now that I've been at it for a while, and have written a number of books, I get a sense right away of what works and what doesn't, and I'm fortunate that I get a lot of great advice.
AG: You explore a number of recurring themes in your writing: thwarted ambition/desire, dashed hopes, men in denial, workplace psychology, stale relationships, to name but a few. Are these aspects of human existence/relationships that you find particularly fascinating? And is it more than just the exploration of these themes that make your writing "noir"?
JS: Wow, you make my books sound so uplifting! But, seriously, I do find these themes interesting, much more interesting than writing about a world where things always work out perfectly. I like to create situations where the stakes are high for my characters, where they make decisions that often turn out to be the wrong ones. But, unlike say David Goodis, I usually try to balance out the bleak situations my character's are in with humor, using humor as a type of redemption. I've always liked writing that makes me feel uncomfortable, that makes me squirm (in a good way) while I'm reading, but that also makes me laugh and feel gripped because I want to find out what happens next, so I try to create that feeling in my own books...And, yes, I do think the themes I deal with contribute to why my books are considered "noir." As we all know noir is an ambiguous term and sometimes hard to define, but a lot of it does have to do with "things not working out the way they're supposed to" and a dark view of the world, and I think that definitely comes out in my writing.
AG: You've written a couple of screenplays: NOTHING PERSONAL, based on your second novel, and OCTOBER SQUALL, which will star Halle Berry. How did these projects originate and how are they progressing?
JS: The two projects are sort of
related. A couple of years ago, I was hired to adapt NOTHING PERSONAL for a U.K.
production company. The co-producers of the project subsequently hired me to
write an original screenplay for Halle Berry, which became OCTOBER SQUALL.
NOTHING PERSONAL was close to getting made a couple of months ago with Jake
Gyllenhaal as Joey and Eva Mendes as Maureen, but now I'm not sure what's going
to happen with it. OCTOBER SQUALL is at a studio and will likely be filmed in
the fall or next spring. It's about a woman (Halle), who is raped, gets
pregnant, has a son, then when the son hits puberty she realizes the apple
hasn't fallen far from the tree. It takes place in the 60s and 70s, has a lot of
twists and good supporting roles, and I'm excited about the chance of seeing it
filmed. At this point, COLD CALLER, also seems to have a decent chance of
getting made. A screenplay was written a couple of years ago and now Nick
Nolte's company is taking it over, with Nolte to play the role of Nelson
Simmons, owner of the company. But things change rapidly in the movie business,
so who knows what'll happen?
AG: What makes screenwriting easier/harder than writing a novel?
JS: For me, the process of screenwriting is much easier than novel writing. You have to do just as much plotting, but there's much less writing to do, and I find the whole process very enjoyable--I really love it. What happens after the screenplay is written is another story. You realize that all the nightmare stories that you've heard about Hollywood are true. You have very little input and if you get emotionally involved in a project it's even worse. It makes you appreciate the control you have as a novel writer.
AG: On your website you devote a section to reading. What have you read recently? What are you reading at the moment? Do you ever read (like you write!) more than one book at the same time? How important is it for a writer to read regularly?
JS: Yes, actually, I do sometimes read more than one book at a time. Sometimes I lose track of a book in my apartment and pick up another one and get into it, then go back to the other one. But I almost always finish every book I start. I guess it's a superstition I have--I don't like to leave things unfinished, maybe out of a fear that I won't finish my own books. Recently, I read Whittington's THE DEVIL WEARS WINGS, and an Elmore Leonard I'd never read, SPLIT IMAGES. Currently I'm reading AMSTERDAM by Ian McEwan. I try to read a combination of current crime fiction, old pulp novels, and literary fiction. While I try to read as much as I can, I probably don't read as much as I did when I first started writing. Part of it is because of demands of time. I have a daughter now, whom I spend half my day with, so when I have free time I spend most of it writing. I'm also a very slow reader--I almost never finish a book in one or two sittings. Still, l try to read at least a book a week, but I used to read much more than that. I think it's very important for writers to read regularly, but it's even more important when you're first starting out. I know collectors will cringe when they read this, but I used to mark up my books, circling passages I liked, making notes about the way the authors structured the plots, and even scribbling ideas for my own novels in the margins. Now, although I still learn a lot from reading, I never mark up my books at all.
AG: Given that you finish almost every book you start, there must have
been a few you've read that weren't very good. How much can you learn from a
badly written novel?
JS:
AG: Speaking of plotting, in your own novels the action always seems to
come from the characters, and you conjure up superbly climactic and satisfying
endings -- something a lot of writers seem to neglect. Do you find plotting
comes easily, or is it the result of hard work? Do you have any tips to help us
less gifted plotters?
JS:
AG: Do your titles spring to mind before you start a new book or are they
inspired by the content? Where did the two-word title motif originate and
how long do you think you'll stick with it?
JS:
AG: Which half of the day do you spend with your daughter and which half
writing? Do you have an office? What sort of ambience do you like to
create whilst you write? How long do you work before taking a break?
JS:
AG: How do you feel about the promotional aspects of a writer's
existence? How much fun do you get out of signings, readings, interviews,
etc?
JS:
AG: It's obvious to anyone who has read "Fake I.D." (speaking of
superb endings) that horse racing is a subject you know very well. Gambling also
features prominently in your work. Where does your racetrack interest stem
from? And do you have a successful betting system you'd like to share!
JS:
AG:In the UK, your publisher No Exit is reissuing your entire backlist with
new, photographic jackets. In the States, Black Lizard have gone for the
black-and-white/sepia retro look. If you had complete control over the
process, how would you like to see your books packaged?
AG: New York is a noir city. How much does being a New Yorker influence
what you write about? How comfortable would you be setting one of your
novels elsewhere?
JS:
AG: Finally, can you tell us what you're working on at the moment?
JS: I'm finishing up my new novel for Vintage, called TWISTED CITY (yes, a two-word title), which will be published in early 2004. I'm very happy with the way it's turned out and I think it may be my best novel yet, and maybe the most noir. I'm also working on another book for Vintage, which I hope will come out in 2005. I've also been plotting out a screenplay for HARD FEELINGS, which I'd love to have a chance to adapt.
AG: Can I order a copy of TWISTED CITY now? I think I might just like it! On behalf of myself and everyone who reads this interview, thank you very much for sharing your thoughts with us, Jason. It's been an education and a pleasure.
photo by Julie Scholz
Black Lizard - his US publisher
Diogenes - his German publisher